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The teapot started to whistle on the stove. Dick’s heart pounded in his chest. Jane was coming down the stairs. He should have known the smell of her shampoo anywhere. Dick’s arm started to tremble. His breathing became rapid. He needed to get away, to anywhere but here. The T.V. was still droning on, only now it had moved on from his escaped ex-wife to a weather report. According to the news it was going to be a beautiful day outside. Dick thought about how wrong they were.
Dick tried to move, but his legs only wobbled. He hadn’t had the strength to fight her off before she went to jail and Dick still had the same limp spine he always had. Jane walked around the couch. She didn’t were the bright orange jumpsuit that he had expected. She was in an outfit that was far too plain for the situation. Jeans and a plain red T-Shirt, neither of which were as tight as he remembered them being. Jane’s mouth curved downward and goosebumps rose over all of Dick’s body. His lips quivered and his eyes grew wider. She was disappointed.
“Honey, you didn’t visit me while I was in prison.” A soft thud drew his eyes to a walking stick she held in one hand, and started to methodically lift up and land on her palm. “I was so disappointed. I mean, I never even saw our daughter, Nell. After all I had done for this family, to be discarded. Do you know how that feels?”
Dick swallowed, looked up at her and shook his head. Her eyes narrowed. “I I’m so ssssorry. I should have…” He stopped as his arm exploded in pain. He cried out. He reached for his arm and she bashed his hand away.
“I did not say you could speak. Do you understand?” Dick’s mouth quivered open, but closed a moment later as he thought better of it. He simply nodded. He glanced at the T.V. A picture of her was on it now. Urgent new information. Little slow to be of help to him though. Jane growled, swiveled and hit the side of the T.V. sending it off the desk and crashing into the ground, sending sparks out into the room as the screen shattered and the sides of the T.V. bent. Dick flinched and shrunk in the chair before her.
She wheeled around and faced him. Her eyes were wilder than before, her expression in a snarl. “Slimy reporters, piggybacking off others deeds.” She muttered.
“Y-yeah, they are jus-” He cried out as the cane connected with his leg.
“God, you’re such fucking retard. I just told you not to speak. Look what you’re making me do.” The cold rubber of the cane him to lift his head until they made eye contact. He snorted back and kept himself from crying. “Fuck, you’re pathetic. Look at you, trembling like a frightened school girl.” She took the cane away and he looked back at the ground.
“I can only imagine how you’ve fucked our kid up while I’ve been away. The work it’s going to take to make her see reason again.” She jabbed the cane into his stomach and he hunched over. She started to walk around the chair. “Don’t worry, I’ll straighten Nell up. She’ll grow up into a fine woman.” He heard her footsteps stop. “Despite your interference.” He felt another impact against the side of his head. As he went down the world grew black.
Dick’s head felt fuzzy as he tried to dig himself back into reality. His thoughts were slow to form, but at long last he started to remember Jane in the house. He forced his eyes open and groaned as bright light made his eyes hurt. He hurt someone say something in the background and footsteps pounding on the ground. They sounded so loud. He looked around and saw the sterile white covering nearly everything. Pain shot out of his arm as he tried to sit up. Then he remembered the attacks. He laid there and pitied himself until people started to gather around him. They asked him questions and at times he nodded or gave short answers. After they were done with their poking, prodding and questions they started to leaved the room. He grabbed the doctors coattail with his good hand. The doctor paused and asked him what he needed.
“My daughter?” He asked. The doctor shook his head.
“Sir, I don’t know. You should talk to the police when they get here.” Dicks fingers grew limp and his arm dropped next to the hospital bed.
By the time the cops got there Dick was sitting up. The world threatened to spin him off the bed and half his body hurt, but he needed to know about his daughter. There’d be time for laying around later, he was sure of that. Two officers marched into the room and stood at the end of the bed. One of them opened up their mouths to speak, but Dick beat them to it.
“My daughter?” He asked. The cops body tensed up. They looked at each other and one of them nodded.
“Gone.” He said. “Now, I’d-”
“What do you mean gone?” His voice rose in volume, but broke halfway through.
“We think she was kidnapped.” The cop kept on talking, but Dick wasn’t listening anymore. His eyes grew distant and he despaired. Jane had her. Nell would have to put up with Jane for the rest of her life. She might not survive. Even if she did, it’d almost be worse. There was a rapping sound as the cop banged a clipboard against the legs of the bed. Dick blinked and his eyes focused on the man.
“Anyway, all of that aside, we’ve got some questions for you.” He said. The cops grilled Dick for awhile about what had happened to him and he told them everything that had happened. After some time they left him there in the hospital. He stayed there for a few days for observation and then went home. Dick called the lead investigator often. There was never any good news. At some point the cop must have got sick of the calls because Dick started to be told the cop was out more and more often. As the weeks passed by his bodies pain lessened. His heart felt heavier as time passed by.
It was an ordinary day when he received an envelope with no return address on it. The handwriting was messy. His heart pounded as he realized it was Jane’s handwriting. His hand trembled as he tore off the flap. Inside he saw something white with letters mostly covered. He lifted it out and saw it said “She turned out to be weak, like you.” He held it for minutes before he got the strength to flip it over. It was a picture of Jane and their daughter Nell at some hotel room. He noticed Nell’s smile was fake, the other two prisoners who escaped and finally a plastic sheet on the bed. He dropped the picture and feel to his knees. He wept right there in the kitchen. Everything that mattered was gone.
Jane's early release
I know it sucks, but I'm going to post in anyway. I'm really rusty and just typed this in an attempt to get more practice. I hope to get as good as I used to be and hopefully better as I pick up steam as well.
For now this is all I have to offer though... *looks at it and sighs*
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Okay, I'm sorry to everyone I was talking to, RPing with and everything else back when I was more active. I'm sure everyone is tired of hearing this by now and quite justifiably wary, but I intend to be getting on here more often from now on. I'll be trying to respond to all old notes over the next few weeks, but if I missed yours/thought I responded already feel free to message me if it seems to take me a long time to get with you.

*Edit* Well, I just saw a journal that hit me hard. Sexual RP even in notes is against DA's rules. I personally don't understand why this is, after all the notes are between just two people, but it turns out it is and that you can be banned for it. It would also explain why some of my RP partners have vanished over the years. So, if you've got any mature RP's you need to go somewhere else for that kind of thing. I'll probably be doing most of it on Skype myself, but to each his own. Good luck everyone and I hope no one else is banned for this.

P.S. If you don't believe me, check out this page of DA's FAQ section: help.deviantart.com/940/

P.S.S. My RP account is :iconsvasten: Created it because of the rules against "Lewd Content"
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I've been busier with the holiday season than I thought I'd be. I'm sorry I haven't been able to respond to any RPs for awhile and while I don't see that changing for a little while for a number of different reasons. (The biggest being my dad's lack of internet.) I am still interested in all of the RPs though and will respond hopefully in a few days. I hope that doesn't bother anyone too much, but that's just the way it had to be for now.
Okay, I'm sorry to everyone I was talking to, RPing with and everything else back when I was more active. I'm sure everyone is tired of hearing this by now and quite justifiably wary, but I intend to be getting on here more often from now on. I'll be trying to respond to all old notes over the next few weeks, but if I missed yours/thought I responded already feel free to message me if it seems to take me a long time to get with you.

*Edit* Well, I just saw a journal that hit me hard. Sexual RP even in notes is against DA's rules. I personally don't understand why this is, after all the notes are between just two people, but it turns out it is and that you can be banned for it. It would also explain why some of my RP partners have vanished over the years. So, if you've got any mature RP's you need to go somewhere else for that kind of thing. I'll probably be doing most of it on Skype myself, but to each his own. Good luck everyone and I hope no one else is banned for this.

P.S. If you don't believe me, check out this page of DA's FAQ section: help.deviantart.com/940/

P.S.S. My RP account is :iconsvasten: Created it because of the rules against "Lewd Content"

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PoonieFox Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
thanks for your watch! :D
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MultipleDimensionx Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!
I see that you RP- cool!
//maybe we could some day~
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topec Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. You deserved it.
I enjoy a good RP, yeah. I've actually been looking for new RP partners. Of course, if we actually do it it'll be with my new RP account :iconsvasten: This is my main art account ever since I found out that DA reads notes and your account can get banned if the content is too mature. (That sure surprised me, let me tell you.) I respond quicker to notes and messages on there because I check it for RP responses.
Of course, you said some day, so you may be busy and I'd understand that.
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MultipleDimensionx Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I'm not busy, I just didn't want to seem too pushy, y'now? And wow- knowing DA reads notes is a bit unnerving honestly, I might use my own backup account if needed. I'll go watch that account~
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Svasten Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I can understand that fully. Yeah, I didn't like finding out that DA was reading notes either, but at the end of the day it's their site so they do technically have the rites to. (Though, I don't think it's fair of them since it's private communications.) Thanks for the watch by the way.
So, I'd be happy to start an RP with you. Do you prefer DA notes, Skype or some other form of communication for an RP?
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cameo525 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for your fav.
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ThePerilPimp Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Student Artist
Thanks. :)
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lovesfantasystuff Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015
Thank you for the fav!! 
hopefully more stuff will be going up soon :D
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DragonFairy88 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the :llama:!
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Nomad55 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the :+fav: and the :+devwatch: it really means a lot :D
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chibiluvershadow Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the favorite on that RP?

you interested?
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topec Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It seemed fairly interesting, but my activity level may be a bit spotty so you'd have to be aware of that. Also, I'd have a number of questions concerning your RP style to make sure both of ours matched and to see where the limits of the RP were (like general RP rules you have or things you don't want to have happen in the RP) and what direction you'd like the RP to head in.
If you'd still be interested in RPing with me please send me a note and we can start talking about it :)
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Nafyo-Toons Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Isabella from AC: Thanks for the Fav by Nafyo    
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xXSword-ChanXx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thx for the fav!
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TailypoArtist Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave I think?...
That online family thing was mainly intended for my friends...
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topec Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, I was on you're profile on my phone and faved it as a way to find your profile again. I guess that particular fave was more conspicuous than I thought.
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TailypoArtist Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well you could have bookmarked my profile. anyway Why did you want an easy way to find  me again?
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topec Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
How do you bookmark people's profiles on the DA mobile app? I haven't been able to figure it out yet and that'd really help me out.
I saw a comment you made on an RP prompt and though I don't have time to RP right at the moment I was thinking about messaging you when I did. Though I can tell I've made a bad first impression so I'm sorry about this and I'll make sure not to bother you again.
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GrayKnight121 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
 Happy Birthday Godliek :D 
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the watch and fav! I'll be doing my best to get your comments soon, I apologize for my slowness....
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topec Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You are very much welcome. It's alright, we all get busy sometimes and I'm a patient person. 
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug: I appreciate that.
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StitchesAndThePen Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist
Thank you for the watch and the llama! 
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Pine4ppleProductions Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the llama!! :D
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CreatureEyes Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Tysm for the llama! Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] 
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